「BEC写作」解析：这封邮件有何不妥之处？(2)

From: A@rightway.com

Date: 25:7:1-16:06:29

To: B@rightway.com

Subject: REMINDER!!!

John

Appreciate if you would consider and bear in mind that I am no longer responsible for dealing with petty cash. Some of your staff keep bringing their vouchers to me, but this responsibility has been taken over by Martin in Accounts, he is the one who should be contacted henceforth for all petty cash matters.

Your cooperation is appreciated in making sure all your staffs know about this.

BRgs/Sally

Subject: REMINDER[a1] !!!

John

Appreciate [a2] if you would consider and bear in mind[a3] that I am no longer responsible[a4] for dealing with petty[a5] cash. Some of your staff[a6] keep bringing their vouchers to me, but this responsibility has been taken over by Martin in Accounts , [a7] he is the one who should be contacted henceforth [a8] for all petty cash matters.

Your [ a9] cooperation is appreciated in making sure all your staffs [a1 0] know about this.

BRgs [ a11] /Sally

Subject: Sally’s Job Transfer

Dear John

Have you heard about the job transfer in our department? Now, I am dealing with other accounting problems arising in our current project, so Martin in Accounts will be responsible for the matters related with vouchers and what I previously did.

I would appreciate it if you communicate this message to your staff.

Thank you!

Best wishes

Sally