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  June 8th

  Dear Haiqing,

  I hear you are very unhappy these days because your parents can’t afford to buy you some brand-name shoes and garments you like very much. And I write you this letter to share with you what I think about this matter.

  To begin with, beauty is just skin deep. Don’t you think it silly to pay so much attention to your appearance? He is a shallow person who judges others by their appearance; in the same sense, he is a shallow person who thinks that a brand-name garment can add to his glamour. So please, just forget about those brand-name things. What really matters is not whether you wear brand-name shoes or garments but whether your clothes fit you. As a student, you have to wear the school uniform on the weekdays and to be honest, you look very smart in it. Then why do you have to bother to buy the expensive brand-name things?

  Secondly, I know your parents are both average workers. Hard as they work, they don’t earn much. Despite this, they do their best to give you a lot of things on demand. Look at the callus on their hands and wrinkles on their faces, how can you have the heart to ask for more than they can afford, which will surely break their hearts? Remember, parents don’t owe us expensive summer camps; they don’t owe us Sony Walkman; nor do they owe us Nike shoes, If you really want those fancy things, you should take a part-time job to contribute to their purchase rather than ask your parents for money to add to their already heavy burden. Don’t you think so?

  Thirdly, we have such a wide variety of things available these days which are both nice and inexpensive. What’s the point of paying much more for those brand-name things that are not much better? My friend, take my advice, and you’ll be a wiser consumer as well as a more considerate child to your parents.

  Poverty, sometimes, is a good thing. It can test a person’s character and it makes a man out of a boy faster than anything else. Keep working hard, and you are bound to be able to afford those things in the near future. Now you may as well focus on your study. Anyway, wouldn’t it be funny for a would-be achiever to be so preoccupied with brand-name things all day long?

  Keep in touch.




  To whom it may concern:

  I’ve learned that an art exhibition is to be held and that you’re collecting suggestions on its location. I’m writing this letter to share with you my opinions.

  In my opinion, it is more advisable to hold the art exhibition in Shanghai Museum than in community libraries. My reasons are as follows.

  On one hand, it is more convenient for people to get to Shanghai Museum which is located in the center of the city. And the museum is much more spacious than community libraries, which provides visitors with a more comfortable environment for appreciating art.

  On the other hand, as a well-known museum, Shanghai Museum is more professional and experienced in holding art exhibitions. Its professional security guards and advanced facilities can better protect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen.

  Therefore, I suggest the exhibition be held in the museum.

  Wang Min


  范文按照书信的形式,首先要提出给收信人,To whom it may concern这里表示的是敬启者,是在读者身份不明时用在信件、通知和证明书开头的套语,也是除了Dear xxx之外英语书信的常见用语。


  第二段明确提出了自己的观点,用了it is more advisable to do...句型,表明“……是更合理的”,常用在提出建议时。段落最后用My reasons are as follows.“我的理由如下”作为一个过渡句引出下面的理由论述。

  第三、四段用on one hand... on the other hand... “一方面……;另一方面……”进行连接,层次清楚。在论述观点时连词的使用可以使逻辑显得更清晰。第三段从便利性角度进行分析,博物馆交通更便利而且环境更舒适,其中用到了which引导的非限定性定语从句。第四段从专业性角度说明博物馆的优势。




  The instant the bell indicating the endof the last class rang, out of the classroompoured all students but one。

  Unlikemy peers, Iwas in no hurry tomake a run for the school canteen, to rushthrough lunch and to return to the classroomfor homework. I arrived at the canteenwhen amassive queue had formed.Waitingformy turn patiently, I smelled the aroma ofthe appetizing food. Greasy as some dishesmight be, thewide range of food preparedby the schoolwas superior in nutritional val-ue to that found elsewhere。

  The typical schedule of a highschooleris extraordinarily hectic and thus lunch breakis a rare timewhen overworked students canwind down and enjoy the pleasure providedby the flavorful food. Imake it a point topampermy taste buds by savoring every littlebit of taste in food.What I usually like todo over lunch is have amindless conversa-tionwith a couple of studentswho have alsolearnt to smell the roses along the bonebreaking journey through high school. Werounded off our lunch with a dessert, re-freshed and satisfied。

  Come to think of it, it is not the foodbutmy attitude towards life that affordsmepleasure and empowersme in facing up tovarious challenges。(219words)


  现在分词作定语 the bell indicating theend of the last class rang


  (1)out of the classroom pouredall students but one

  (2)Greasy as some dishesmight be

  不定式 Iwas in no hurry to make arun for the school canteen

  状语从句 I arrived at the canteenwhenamassive queue had formed。

  现在分词作状语 Waiting formy turnpatiently,

  过去分词作状语 the wide range offood prepared by the schoolwas superior


  (1)thewide range of foodprepared by the schoolwas superior in nu-tritional

  value to that found elsewhere。

  (2)enjoy the pleasure provided by theflavorful food

  并列句 The typical schedule of a highschooler is extraordinarily hectic and

  thuslunch break is a rare time


  (1)thus lunch break is a raretime when overworked students can winddown

  (2) a couple of studentswho have alsolearnt to smell the roses

  主语从句 What I usually like to doover lunch is have amindless conversation

  过去分词作主语补足语 We roundedoff our lunch with a dessert, refreshed


  强调句 it is not the food butmy atti-tude towards life that affordsme



  pour out冲出

  rush through草草了事

  amassive queue 排长龙



  extraordinarily 特别地



  wind down休息、放松

  pampermy taste buds宠爱我的味蕾

  smell the roses [习语]享受生活

  bone-breaking 累人的

  empower 给人动力









  Dear Leslie,

  How are you? Glad to see you have made some progress in Chinese learning and I’m writing to tell you something about ournext lesson.

  The lesson will be given from 3 pm to 5 pm on the afternoon of next Tuesday in the The lesson will be given from 3 pm to 5 pm on the afternoon of next Tuesday in the classroom 502. In the class, you will mainly learn Tang poetry, which reflects traditional Chinese culture and is deeply loved by Chinese. You can feel the beauty of Chinese by learning Tang Poetry. You’d better make full preparations before class and have a brief understanding of the history of Tang Dynasty, which makes it easy for you to go through the class.

  If there is anything that I can help you, please don’t hesitate to tell me. Looking forward to meeting you.

  Yours sincerely,