初中英语作文的写作框架

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初中英语作文的写作框架

  一、了解中考英语写作评分标准。

初中英语作文的写作框架

  我们知道中考英语分数,评卷老师绝对不是胡乱按照自己的感觉来给的,他们都有一个统一的标准,如果我们想要得高分的话,就得了解中考英语作文的评分标准,从而有目标性的提高自己的英语写作能力,有计划的得高分。下面是中考英语作文的评分标准。

  中考英语作文评分标准:

  每年根据题目的不同,评分标准都会有所更改,但是其中比较大的几个项目是基本不变的。以下内容也许部分同学已经知道了,且稍安勿躁,验证一下与你所知道的是否相符。

  1.内容分7分。要求包含题目所给出的要点。若要点缺失,可酌情扣分。比如09年中考作文“I want to do something for my school”,若没有写一件具体的事情,是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻,没有实际内容,也会扣1-2分。

  2.语言分8分。首先是字数,少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。其次是语法和拼写错误,每个扣0.5,重复错误不计;标点错误每4个扣0.5.

  3.组织结构分3分,也就是我们常说的文采分。根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。

  这个评分标准看起来并不复杂,但是在实际操作过程中,这个评分标准会产生不少微妙之处,了解了这些微妙之处,同学们才能有的放矢,有针对性地写出高分作文。

  1.60字绝不仅仅是60字那么简单

  如前所述,中考英语作文要求60字以上,标点符号不算,少了就要扣分。但是60字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看,16分以上的作文,没有少于75字的,甚至少于80字的也少之又少。当然,也极少有超过100字的,因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个,在格子下面大约还有2行的空间,可以加20字左右,再多阅卷人就很难看清了,也会影响卷面的美观(后面我会说“卷面分”的问题)。所以,同学们如果想让作文得到高分,最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

  2.如何有组织、有计划地拿文采分?

  有很多老师和同学说,要拿到文采分,同学们需要在平时做大量的阅读,积累好词好句,还得加上考试中较好的发挥。这个观点没有问题,但是对于初三的同学来讲,我们仍然可以更有方向性的去准备自己的作文,事半功倍地争取文采分。

  原则上讲,前15分少于14分的一般不给文采分,然而在实际操作中我们发现,也有不少的前面得12或13分的同学得到了1-2分的文采加分。

  这是因为老师在阅卷的时候给分是分两大部分给的,前15分是往下扣、后3分是往上加,也就是说对前15分,阅卷老师们是在找扣分的点;后3分,阅卷老师们是在找加分的点。所以并不是全文都要写得精彩绝伦才能得到文采分,只要文章中有1个亮点,基本就可以争取到1分的文采分(当然,3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这些亮点,是可以提前准备的。例如,有一些“万金油”式的复杂句型,例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等,只要同学们多操练几次,几乎是一定能用到作文当中,从而为自己争得文采分的。

  3.真的有“卷面分”吗?

  很多家长和同学,尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学,都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在,在这里我要告诉大家,是有的。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项,但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

  如前所述,中考作文的分数包含3个部分,但是大多数熟练了的老师在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的,而是在第一遍读完全文之后,心里已经形成了一个“印象分”,然后再细读第二、三遍,把印象分分配到3个部分里面。因此,这个“印象分”就非常重要,而同学们的书法,也正是在这个环节,影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的同学们,如果你的书法不好,现在开始练书法还来得及。同学们并不需要写的很漂亮,符合3个简单的标准即可:没有斜体、没有连笔、涂改较少。

  二、多积累。

  看了上面的评分标准,我们知道除了一些技巧性的东西之外最主要的还是要多积累。比如一些有文采的句子,语法正确,或者结构清晰,这些都是平时自己要多背多记才能够在中考中写出好的作文。下面是小编给大家整理的中考英语不同类型的作文模板,大家可以看看,非常的实用。

  中考英语作文必背模板:

  一、说明利弊题型

  这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状,再对比事物本身的利弊,有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发,最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)

  1. 说明事物现状

  2. 事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)

  3. 你对现状(或前景)的看法

  Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ----------------(A的优点之一). Besides

  -------------------(A的优点之二).

  But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ----------------(A的第一个缺点).To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二个缺点).

  Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法).

  (From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, ---------------(对前景的预测).)

  二、议论文的框架

  (1) 不同观点列举型( 选择型 )

  There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 观点一________. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____. So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.

  People, however, differ in their  opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______. In their point of view, on the one hand,___原因一_______. On the other hand, ____原因二_____. Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.

  As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______. It is not only because ________, but also because _________. The more _______, the more ________.

  (2)利弊型的议论文

  Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)___作文题目______. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____. Generally speaking, it is widely

  believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, ___优点一______. And secondly ___优点二_____.

  Just As a popular saying goes, "every coin has two sides", __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, ___缺点一______. In addition, ____缺点二______.

  To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.

  议论文模板

  1.正反观点式议论文模板:

  导入:第1段:Recently we've had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题)

  Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧)

  正文:第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点)

  Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由)

  第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点)

  Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What's more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由)

  结论:第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点) 。

  2."A或者B"类议论文模板:

  导入:第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.

  正文:第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因)

  第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势)

  结论:第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论)

  3.观点论述类议论文模板:

  导入:第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题

  As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对)

  The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下)

  正文:第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的理由)

  结论:第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成"总-分-总"结构)

  4."How to"类议论文模板:

  导入:第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题

  正文:第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法)

  结论:第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法)

  三、 解决方法题型

  考生要列举出解决问题的多种途径

  1. 问题现状

  2. 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)

  In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明A的现状).Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状)

  Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一). For another -------------(解决方法二). Finally,

  --------------(解决方法三).

  Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法). Consequently, I'm confident that a bright future isawaiting us because --------------(带来的好处).

  以上就是初中英语写作技巧,非常的实用。

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